The AWC Twitter Competition 2016-17
The rules of the AWC Twitter Competition are simple.
Every two weeks, the AWC team posts a long and cumbersome sentence. All students and staff at NUIG can compete by
posting a shortened version on Twitter (https://twitter.com/awcnuig).
The challenge is not to lose any important information while reducing the word
count. The most elegant version wins. Sentences will be posted in English and
in Irish. There will be at least three
rounds throughout March, with prizes ranging from €5 to €15.
The competition aims to start a conversation about
good writing style. Writers are often advised to condense their writing. As the
author of The Elements of Style explains,
this does not require writers to ‘avoid all detail and treat [their] subjects
only in outline, but that [they] make every word tell’ (Stunk 24). Ideas should
be expressed in the least possible number of words, and superfluous words
should be avoided.
By putting this advice at the core of the
competition, we hope to transform our Twitter page into a place of mutual
learning. We will watch cumbersome sentences transform into elegant ones, and
we invite everyone to join in the conversation by commenting on the process.
@AwcNuig
This week's prize is €10, the deadline is 18 March, and the cumbersome sentences are below.
1. I
have travelled extensively, and, having compared the
amount of precipitation around the world, I can safely confirm that the weather
here in Galway,
which is a city in the west of Ireland, which is already a rainy place is
really unpredictable sometimes and really generally rainy and more rainy than
Dublin which, in spite of what most people think, actually has the same
amount of rain as Rome, which is considered a sunny place, and Galway is also really foggy and sometimes it
also hails or snows in the city of Galway.
2. Rith
siad go tobann gan choinne i dtreo an tsiopa a bhà ar chúl na leabharlainne
móire, foirgneamh mór nua a bhà nua-thógtha le déanaÃ.
Works Cited
William
Stunk. The Elements of Style: the
Original Edition. Dover Publications, 2012.
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